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Moonlit Kiss

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Put in Scrap! So old!!

Yay! :la: I finally finished my fan/hate art for With The Bears by *swordclaw42!!!!!
...
Wait a minute? "Hate art"?
Yes! You heard me! I. Hate. Xaena!!!!!! :pissed:
Yep. I made a list of what I hate about her.
What I hate about Xaena:
- Everything.

Enough said.



Anyhoo! :D I like this pairing. It's doomed. I like doom. :D Well, these are characters from Rinny(swordclaw42)'s story With The Bears, and you should really read the chapters she's posted up!! :D
Here's a [link] to the first part! :D

I worked pretty hard on this, so I hope you guys all like it! :D It's the 'sexiest' thing I've drawn, so I hope I got the kissing right! :XD:

Tools
Pencil and Lined Paper (I drew it)
Scanner (Rinny scanned it)
GIMP 2.6.6
and
A Computer Mouse.

References

For their clothing. Yes, I messed up! ^^; Sorry!!
Image size
1186x1554px 1.57 MB
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

Teehee! Time for my critique...
The angle is nice and the shading is even better. With the moon being in that corner, you did a really nice job of having the moonlight emit from the actual moon. But what I don't get is: shouldn't the light be on the other side of their faces? After all, the moon is "behind" them. But don't worry, that part is only noticable if you look REEEEEEAAAALLLY close. The wrinkles on the clothingstand out quite a bit, because they are black. A tip for next time: maybe you could have "smoothed out" or blended the wrinkles so they aren't so obvious.
I also really like the scenery, it sortr of "spotlights" the two, and the treetops are just gorgeous. The way the sky is indigo, makes it feel like sort of mysterious. ^^
Overall, this piece, I would say, is one of your best anime-people type things. It conveys a simple and sweet feeling, with a little mystery.I hope you found this helpfull and not too too offending!